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10 April 2009 @ 01:14 pm
Deep Void, TabiRi; Angst  
Title: Deep Void
Pairing: TabiRi (re-written from HoMin)
Genre: Angst, AU-ish
Summary: They're like two pieces of the remaining jigsaw puzzle that desperately try to fit, tying to fit somewhere in the world. But they don’t fit, it’s like two opposite pieces that try being jammed together but it only ends up like bent cardboard


 

 

They're like two pieces of the remaining jigsaw puzzle that desperately try to fit, tying to fit somewhere in the world. But they don’t fit, it’s like two opposite pieces that try being jammed together but it only ends up like bent cardboard. There’s a bump here and a gap there but the other piece has a hole over here and something sticking out over there…

 

They’re fooled by the illusion. As if one of the pieces gets carved to fit the other…and they think that finally…they fit.

 

 

But even after the cutting and carving made to fit, the other piece grows back to what it used to be and the illusion finally clears to an abyss of reality, the deep and empty void there all along. The piece realizes and decides that he doesn’t fit here but fits over there instead…

 

…The piece that’s left behind knew about all of this, and he thinks that after the cutting that was made to fit each other, somehow his heart got carved with the other in the process

 

 


And when the bearing is over and something is done to end it…

 



The puzzle is finally finished…




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Vickytenshibattosai on April 10th, 2009 07:46 am (UTC)
I love the description in this! :)

I'd say short and sweet, but probably more bittersweet? It made me awee, but it was sad ~

I'd quote you, but I think I'd end up quoting the entire drabble, haha XD The entire thing flowed so well~

Good job!
Engraved_16engraved_16 on April 10th, 2009 08:27 am (UTC)
awwwww thanks much ^^

awe quote me >.<keke yeah angsty much, he ended up killing himself because he couldn't bear the pain TT^TT hehe i don know what i was doing writting this lmao but thanks for reading!!~!!
CATHARINA: Tabi dino ♥orenjimaru on April 10th, 2009 10:52 am (UTC)
T^T

xxx
Engraved_16engraved_16 on April 10th, 2009 11:00 pm (UTC)
Unnie~

i need more specifics LMAO other than T^T hehe
at the top as oyu can see it was re-written from my HoMin one i did lol

p.s seen winds preview with G-D??
CATHARINAorenjimaru on April 11th, 2009 03:10 pm (UTC)
Sorry I was incoherent, it just made me sad. Thanks for making my night depressing LOL.
Quite beautifully done though, rather different from your previous ones, I like how it sounded really distant but still conveys emotions well :)

YES I DID. I thought it was proper good! w-inds. has changed their style slightly again, though probably to match with GD or something. It turned out really good, well up to the hype, I was so pleased with it. How did you find it?
xxx
Engraved_16engraved_16 on April 12th, 2009 12:35 am (UTC)
*pouts* LOL, yes very different i was going a bit metaphorical...i think its just becoz i was high during that time xDDDDD

Im not to sure about w-inds so i dont really know about their style but yeah i did feel like there style was suiting more of G-D's ^^ hehe
CATHARINAorenjimaru on April 12th, 2009 09:14 pm (UTC)
Ahhh go search up some of their stuff then; they're actually really good. Their old stuff is more typical Jpop-ish music, fun & catchy and all, but their new stuff these couple years breaks away from how mainstream Japanese boyband sounds. Worth going into their fandom, really.
*shameless fandom plugging HAHA)
I have to say, whoever thought up the crossover is a genius; Rain Is Falling is well good :D
xxx
Engraved_16engraved_16 on April 14th, 2009 10:45 pm (UTC)
hehe i did like rain is falling, but his voice was so typical J-Popish lol but it was pretty good, half of G-D rap i couldn't understand a word he was saying xDDD lol until i read his lyrics xDD still didnt make sense either =3

ima stick wit my J-Rock OMO im luvn ScReW like soooo much ^^
CATHARINA: BANGS  -_______-;;;orenjimaru on April 18th, 2009 07:29 pm (UTC)
I only actually understood "GD and U".
*runs and hides*
xxx
Engraved_16: Tabi riengraved_16 on April 23rd, 2009 08:39 am (UTC)
ne, ne unnie!!! -points at icon and dies- HOMFG TT^TT
oh and they finally have a commu for TabiRi >.<Its quite empty though/ or either new keke its called seunghyun_x2 weeeee *0* -drools over icon- its not mine though TT_TT
CATHARINA: Tabi dino ♥orenjimaru on April 23rd, 2009 07:54 pm (UTC)
OMFG INORITE I'VE SEEN THAT ICON AND I LOVE IT! :D:D
Quite ingenious really, how someone thought to photoshop Ri into Hyori's place LOL.
*points at my own icon* See, Tabi is happy as well, he's all puckered up ready to smooch Ri again HAHAA

Oh yes, that comm is quite new, it appeared at the same time as the BaeRi, ToDae, GTop etc comms. (If I'm not wrong they were made by the same person as well..)
But yeah, its also quite empty. I keep forgetting to post my fics there! XP

*stares at your icon and wipes drool*
xxx
Engraved_16: Tabi riengraved_16 on April 23rd, 2009 10:17 pm (UTC)
YES -drools- hahaha how is what i wanna know...look so real *o* -sparkles like a happy fangirl- haha yes with a silly dinosaur costume...when did he wear that??

yeah joined all of them ^^ BaeRi, and Topbae ^o^ they should make a G-dae :3, -now im gonna ask the person if i can steal the icon as well- MWHAHAHA
CATHARINA: Seungri ♥orenjimaru on April 24th, 2009 04:52 pm (UTC)
Oh, the magical properties of Photoshop HAHA.

It was during one of their perfs I think, I've actually always
wanted to know as well LOL
He wore a similar one (a dragon) on the Chocopie game show HAHA. Oh Tabi~

OH do they not have a GDae one? :O
I've always thought they were a well cute pairing!
xxx
Engraved_16: Tabi riengraved_16 on April 25th, 2009 01:04 am (UTC)
YAY unnie shes let me snag it :3 -happy fangirl-

they need to do more fanservice -_- lol there like the Big Bang version of Jaemin hahaha always hitting eachother *from daeri's intimate note...they were singing candy and while Ri was busting a move next to Tabi, Top just kept hitting him* lol Top's way of showing love keke

that chocopie show? was ti the one where he had to carry Ri??

yea they dont have it TT_TT, lol they are =D

CATHARINAorenjimaru on April 25th, 2009 10:48 am (UTC)
LOL good for you :D

I AGREE! There needs to be more TabiRi love in the world for sure~
HAHA yeah I was laughing when Tabi was bopping him on the head with his giant glove thingy (sorry Ri).

I'm not sure if you had to carry him, but yes he did, Ri basically jumped on him and Tabi stumbled around in circles snuggling each other AWWWWWWW~~!
xxx
Engraved_16engraved_16 on April 25th, 2009 11:05 am (UTC)
haha i'll just use when ever i release some tabiri lolz

and the other time on daeri where he was grabbing him by the neck, but it makes sense that they dont have alot of fanserivce coz BB is like the only idol group that does not act gay lol there to serious and hard working to be mucking around lol so its hard to write fics coz they watch what they do keke

Ri look weird as a fat pig...-searches show- hahaha
CATHARINA: Tabi dino ♥orenjimaru on April 25th, 2009 11:40 am (UTC)
Yeah I know what you mean, its a little frustrating for fic writers sometimes; they dont do anything remotely lovey-dovey and we have like no inspiration that comes from them. No wonder there are so many AU fics floating around eh

Errr I dont think he's meant to be a pig; his costume's a rabbit HAHA, though why they made it in pink I'll never know. (Whoever's heard of a pink rabbit?)
xxx
Engraved_16engraved_16 on April 26th, 2009 12:56 am (UTC)
-_- *sigh* thats why we're always wondering 'what if they did this at home' xDD lmao thats why the suju commu has ALOT, DBSK too but they border on AU mostly becoz there use to the band!fic stuff so thats why lol

i have! but hsi tail looked like a pig O_O do you have a link to that show?
Evany 에파니: TOPvangelynn on April 11th, 2009 03:22 am (UTC)
*jabbers* Omo! This was a HoMin fic too =D Gosh, I love love love love love! The last line was so perfect!! *_*

Yay! You got a new layout too :D

~ thanks for writing

Maru-unni, I like your comment XD
Engraved_16engraved_16 on April 11th, 2009 06:37 am (UTC)
LOL...well since this drabble has no clarifictions on a pair originally i just felt like it was a HoMin but decided to make it a TabiRi too ^^, hehe thanks ^^~you get what it means right?? and i luv the ending too

hahahha yes, i need a more darker LJ

hahah >.> orenjimaru unnie is in some kind of state right now lol

brilliessence on April 11th, 2009 11:37 pm (UTC)
ooh sorry. i deleted the other comment because it got screwed up :/

okay:

alkj;dlkdajslkaj df -dies-

sad ;_____; like. eat my heart sad.

and your comment "i reveal my age alot too becoz people get amazed about the maturity of my writing"

its a nice feeling, right? to know that if people think you write beautifully now, then in the future you'll write amazingly well :DD thats what im hoping for <3

well, anyways, really good puzzle!to-ri fic xD
did you read my stuff? i think i remember you. a comment, maybe?
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Engraved_16engraved_16 on April 12th, 2009 12:41 am (UTC)
asdfghjkl; *dies with your keyboard smash*
*pouts* here *gives you a new heart* keke

hehe thanks i soooo thought you were older than me TT^TT i feel old now TT_TT xDD ahahaha. yeah it feels nice ^^ when people compliment on your writing and they hear your age and they flip ^o^, and Yea i hope my writing improves

lmao originally the pairing i had in mind was HoMin and i still feel like HoMin fits but i decided to make it tabiRi too since there was no actual specifics on whos who ^-^, yesh i think i wrote on your You,You,You fic and bashed that girl who was plagirising XDDD *feels guilty, but i got her to delete it* LMBO